“Maria, which traveling resort do you like to go? I think Quebec is a good choice. How do you think about it?” said the man.

“Hm, it’s a good idea, Edward. Now I have to prepare something we need, and you go to tell Ivy about this. She will be very excited,” said Maria.

One the second day, Edward and Maria took their daughter, Ivy, to the resort at Canada by their own car. They were in a famous skiing field of Canada. There was a big field standing there and lots of people were skiing. Green forests surrounded the whole field. The sunshine, falling down on thesnow, warmed people. At the destination, Ivy, a five-year-old and naughty girl ran out from the car and yelled,

”Wow, there is snow falling down in my hands, Daddy! Could I play with snow?” “You have to wear your snow boots first,” said Maria with a smile.

Ivy wore her beautiful pink snow boots then Edward held her hand and walked to the skiing store.

“May I help you?”said store clerk.

“I want to rent three sleighs, two for adult one for child.”said Edward.

The store clerk took three sleighs to him. They were going to begin their trip.

“Can you teach me how to ski, daddy?”said Ivy.

“Of cause, my little angel.” Edward held his daughter’s hands and started to ski slowly. Ten minutes later, Ivy could ski easily without her father’s help.

“You did a good job,Ivy.”said Maria.

Edward let Ivy ski herself and went to buy coffee with Maria.

At the same time, they heard a big scream and saw many people around got together something.

“A little girl fell down and her head collided with the ground.Much blood flew from her body. Where is her mother and father?”said a stranger.

Edward and Maria walked out of the store and ran towards the crowd. They saw Ivy lies on snow with blood all over her body. Maria screamed at first and then held her daughter in her arms. Edward gave a call to the police and asked them for help.

“Don’t worry, my baby. you will be okay,” said Maria.

        After an ambulance arrived, the doctor took Ivy into the ambulance. Edward and Maria drove thrie car and followed the ambulance. When they got to the hospital, doctors took Ivy into an operation room immediately. One hour ago, the doctor told Edward that his daughter suffered from Leukemia. Leukemia is a serious disease that may cause the sufferer to death. To cure this disease and make the operation go smoothly, it was necessary to perform the operation in a hurry. However, it took a huge amount of money for the operation.

        Edward drove to the bank and wanted to see how much dollar he has. He pressed down the computer’ button; 102.39 revealed on the screen. Edward was worried and upset because he didn’t have the ability to let his daughter to do an operation. At the same time, he thought of his best friend Frank,who might help him.Edward called Frank

“Can you give me a hand?,”

“What happened, Edward?,”said Frank.

Then Edward told everything to Frank.

“I feel sorry about it, but I don’t have lots of money. I heard a legend about golden-fur bear. If you hunt the bear, maybe you can sell it in order to get cash,”said Frank.

“That’s a good idea, but can you come with me?”said Edward.

         “Sure.” said Frank with a big smile. 
 Therfore, Edward told Maria about this, and Maria was very happy because of the hope to save her daughter. To pay for the operation, they decided to go to hunt the golden bear with Frank. Three days later, Edward, Maria and Frank drove at their destination,the western forest in America.

Entering the forest, they took the tools for hunting and began to find the golden bear with the guidance of Frank, who was a veteran of hunting.

“It’s a little bit of difficult to find the golden bear because it is winter. Golden bears will stay at their cave to hibernation. Only those bears who have a new born baby will go out to search for food to feed babies.,” said Frank.

“Hm…., I think I’ll still try to find it to get its precious fur. It’s the only way for me and Maria to get money quickly,” said Edward with a stern look.

“Okay, shall we start our work, Frank? I just want to find the golden bear right now and sell its fur to get money! Don’t waste my time!!! My daughter now is in a dangerous condition, do you know that?! Wawawa….Ivy…. why the God gave you such sorrowful present…..wawa,” yelled and cried Maria in deep despair.

“Don’t cry, honey. Frank just wanted to tell us what he knows. Let’s go hunt the bear. Don’t cry my honey, let’s go right away,” said Edward heatrbroken,embracing Maria.He winked at Frank.

“Now, we go this road which is a short cut to the habitats of bears.” said Frank with courage.

Then they began finding bears with their thick coats, boosts and heavy tools.On the way to bears’ caves, all they can see were dead white scenes. The maple trees were covered with thick snow and without any leaves. The ground was also covered with heavy snow. The only sound they could hear was the sound of owls. It made this hunting journey even more horrible and colder. After a long walk for around eight hours, Maria felt very tired and couldn’t bear this hard walk.

“Could we stop to take a break? My feet ached badly.”said her.

“ Okay, although there is only about two- hour walk to golden bear’s cave, I think we should camp here tonight to restore our energy. Tomorrow we will go home with golden fur.” said Frank.

       In the evening, they had a simple meal and made a camp fire to warm up.

“Thanks for your guidance, Frank, my friend. Without you, Maria and I will panic and do nothing for my daughter.” said Edward with full thank to Frank.

“That’s my only way to help you, Edward. It’s no big deal.” said Frank with a smile. “Thank you, Frank, and I’m very sorry for my attitude toward you this morning.

I shouldn’t be rude to you just because of my sadness. Please forgive me,” said Maria with deep apology.

“Never mind, my dear. I know now you’re very worried about your daughter. As a mother, this kind of behavior is normal and common. Now take a sweet sleep for tomorrow’s task,Maria and Edward.”said Frank.

But at night, Edward went out off their camp.

“I just want to get the golden fur right now. It’s the best moment to hunt bears.’’ Edward told to himself. Edward walked on the way to bears’ cave. Two hours later, he stood across a big cave. He hid behind a group of rocks to observe whether there was bear living in it or not. For a while, there was a big bear with shining golden fur which lit up the ground in the dark. The golden bear was going around as if it was looking for something. Suddenly, a little cub walked out from the cave, following the bigger one. Edward was so excited that there were two bears with beautiful valuable fur. He wanted to hunt two of them to get more money than he expected. The two bears were like mother and child. The bigger one hugged her baby and played with it happily. At the sight of it, Edward thought of his lovely daughter, Ivy, who was very sick and in grave danger. He thought about the happy time when he and Maria took Ivy to go skiing in Canada. He didn’t expect that Ivy would get the serious disease, leukemia. It took away her childhood and hurt Edward and Maria’s heart. He just took up his gun and aimed at the bigger bear. But when he saw the little bear following its mother cutely and need her care, Edward hesitated. He really wanted to make his daughter be cured. He expected to see Ivy play and stand healthily before him. The little bear hugged its mother firmly for a long time. The image of sick Ivy appeared in Edward’s mind.

“Bang-”A sound of gun shot cracked the silent daybreak.

“Ow ~ow,”the bears yelled. Edward didn’t aim right at the bigger bear. Now Edward tried to shot one of them to go back quickly to meet his friend and wife.The bigger bear took her baby running into the farther part of the forest, and Edward was chasing up after her. They finally ran at the crag. Edward thought it’s a good time to hunt them. But to his surprise, the mother bear hugged her baby tightly and jumpped down over the steep cliff.          

“NO~my golden fur~,”yelled Edward.

     With the enormous disappointment, Frank, Edward and Maria went back home with their tired body. After they drove at the hospital where Ivy stayed for treatment, Maria rushed into the sickroom to see her daughter. Nurses and a doctor coldly around the sickbed.At the sight of Ivy’s body covered with a white cloth, Maria could not help but cry loudly to the sky.                

There are some advices that I want to give to you. Firstly, our library is very abundant. There are many types of book in our library, for example, novels, hymnbooks and magzines. You can borrow somebooks everyweek in order to improve your composition. Secondly, there are many clubs in our school, you can choose one to join it. Clubs are always take place many activities, it can let your high school life abundantly. Finally, I want to advise you that you can occupy the cadre. Not only can help classmates but also good for entering a higher school.

I think that you will love MingLun high school after my introduction. Although there are lots of good things in our school but you still have to work-hard for your schoolwork.

What it takes to be a good leader? There are some characteristics that I think leaders should have. The first one of the traits I think a good leader should have is courage which let a leader make uncommon decisions and gut calls. Because not all policy is correct, the leader should be courage enough to give some better advice. Second one is that leaders should establish trust with candor, transparency and credit. If a leader isn’t honest, followers will not trust him. The third is that leaders should inspire his or her people who are in desperate situation, and tell them how to learn from it by making himself as a model. Be positive,energetic or optimistic is the fourth trait which a leader should have in my opinion. Positive is the most powerful thing, and it can make people be filled with hope and energy.

Lincoln is a good model of a leader. He never let the world forget that the Civil War involved an even larger issue. This he stated most movingly in dedicating the military cemetery at Gettysburg: “that we here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain that this nation, under God, shall have a new birth of freedom and that government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the earth.” He showed us that we need to be courage enough to against with something unfear and freedom.

 Leaders is a main point in a organization, if the organization have no good it could be failure, so we need to think about which is the most important about leaders.

   A group of people need a leader to lead  them.  There are some characteristics that I think leaders    should have.

  2.Character one—be courage

   A leader should be courage. Because not all policy is correct, the leader should be courage enough to give some better advice.

 3.Character two—be honest

Because if a leader isn’t honest, followers will not trust him.

 4.Character three—be positive

    Because positive is the most powerful thing, and it can make people be filled with hope and energy

 5.Conlusion:

Leaders is a main point in a organization, if the organization have no good it could be failure, so we need to think about which is the most important about leaders.

Just as it begins to appear as if Batman, Lt. James Gordon, and District Attorney Harvey Dent are making headway in their tireless battle against the criminal element, a maniacal, wisecracking fiend plunges the streets of Gotham City into complete chaos.

There are some reasons about why I like it very much. Firstly, the movie discuss about justice, no people like scoundrels, we can against them to uphold our justice. Secondly, this movie is very exciting and compact, there are many conflicts and climaxs. It also succeed in special efficacy. Third one is that the guote in the movie stimulate deep thought. There is a quote said by clown “Madness is like graverty all it takes is just a little push.” It means that when people in the poor situation, whenever how justice is the men, he is going to be crazy.   

 Don’t forget to see this movie after my introduction. In my opnion “The Dark Night ” is the best movie I have ever seen.

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    First, it will abate their parent’s economic pressure. Not all of  the students are born in the rich family and have wealthy parents. Charges for tuition is too expensive for them to  pay, so children can worl to  abate the parents’ pressure.

   Others one  is, we can show what we have learn. We learned lots of skills from the school but sometimes we don’t have a stage to show what we have learned. If we have some work, we can try our skills on it and prepare for the work we will do in the future.

   The other  is the most important one. When we work we will learn to be responsible and to be independence. We will not rely on our parents anytime and anywhere.

   According to illstrations above, I think it  will be good to  work when we are students but we still have to be care the job we choose.

    When everything looked perfect and peaceful, suddenly our friendship changed. Some of them didn’t want to talk to  me. When I asked them some questions, they only replied coldly. I was so sad and got hurt. Unfortunately, I didn’t know why they didn’t want to talk to me and left me away.

    I wanted to  know what happened, so I decided to  ask them and face the problem. We walked round a circle and talked each other our ture feeling from the bottom of our heart. They thought I was foolish that everything I only thought about myself. From then on, I decided to change my personality. Don’t just think about myself. I need to  pay more attention to everybody.  ” It’s better to give than to recieve” is the most important thing I learned.